I was born as a wonderful child. I had a happy life but, one day I figured out I had asthma. I was timid about my illness. Now
I'm 5, I thought that having asthma isn't that defective! As the sun came out, I
felt like I couldn't breathe. A few minute later, I knew it was an asthma attack.  I didn't know what to do. I never had an asthma attack anteriorly! Also it was my birthday! I decided not to tell my mom. An hour pass, and I died! I never knew that this was going to transpire.


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Do you think it was a good idea to hide that the author had an asthma attack?

What would had happen if the author told his/her mother?

If you had an asthma attack what would you do? Why?

 
 
Do you like stories with happy endings? If you do,  then close this website right away! This story  doesn't have any happy beginning or ending. So please I'm warning you, don't read this story. If you keep on reading don't say I didn't warn you.


It all started when Angelo and Angela were born. They were fraternal twins. Their mother and father were so happy to have twins! They were so happy until, Angela and Angelo were about 5 years old. Their mother had cancer and sadly past away. Without their mother they had become very poor.

When Angelo and Angela was 8 years old their father decided to move to a forest near by.  Now Angela and Angelo are 13 years old. They are able to stay in their house alone.

So one day, their father went out the forest to look for food. He told Angela and Angelo don't go out of the house after 6:00pm.  Angela and Angelo played hide and seek. By 6:oo Angela and Angelo went inside their house and were really tired! Their father wasn't home yet! Usually their father would be home by 6. It became really dark and Angela and Angelo were really hungry and scared. They went to their room and fixed their bed. Angelo crawled inside his bed while, Angela looked   out the window.She saw the bushes move. Angela became really sacred.

"Angelo, wake up!" Angela said.

"What's the matter?" Angelo asked.

"I saw something moving the bushes." Angela said.

"Oh that's just a bird or something." Angelo replied.

" Okay." Angela said

Angela didn't believe her brother so then she decided to go out side to check it out herself. Angela went towards the bushes and she saw nothing!

"Maybe Angelo was right." Angela said.

When Angela turned around she saw a.......

To be continued....
Comment down below what you think Angela saw. As I said, One of your lucky guesses may be in the next part of your story.
 
 
Gobble,
gobble, I need help over here! It’s Thanksgiving! Humans, eating, turkey,
dinner! Do you know what that means? I am in great danger! How did I end up on
this dusty counter top in this strange place? Well, it is a long story but come
inside this time machine with me and I will show you how I got here. Don’t
worry. When the humans realize I’m gone I will just come back as quickly as
possible. We are going to enter the time machine now, so buckle up. “Broom cling
ding bang boom zing!”



     We’re
  here! It was a sunny day and I was playing kickball with my turkey friends over
  there in a muddy field. One of my turkey friends kicked the ball so far that it
  landed by a medium sized tree and I had to get it. At first, I did not realize
  that there was a human behind the medium size tree, so I got closer and closer
  to the ball until I could touch it with my pointer finger for only a second.
  One of my friends said, “Come on and get the ball!” I turned around and the
  human snatched me from the ball. I looked at the human and was surprised
  because she looked too old to snatch a turkey! The grumpy human put me inside
  her ugly truck and drove me away from my friends. I started to
cry.



   When
the human got home, she put me on her dirty kitchen counter top.



   “Kids, we are
lucky! We do not have to buy a turkey!” the human
said.



   “Why?” asked one
of the human’s kids.



   “I found one!”



    The
human showed me to her kids. One of the kids slapped me in the tummy!



   “This turkey is
too fat!” one of the human’s kids
exaggerated.



    “I
am not fat!” I yelled to myself in my
head.



   “Why didn’t you
just get another turkey?” asked one of the
kids.



   “Well it is
because the other turkeys were too skinny, too small, or too big. This is the
only turkey!” the human said.



     Oh no,
we have to go back to the time machine now before it’s too late! Watch your step
and buckle up! “Broom cling ding bang boom zing!”



     I went
back to the rusty counter top and came just in time. I smelled the delicious
food on the table and all that was left to be cooked was me! Just then, a huge
surprise came to me.



    
“Boom!” went the human’s leading door. My dad kicked it and knocked it
down! Then came in my mom, my older sister, and my older brother! There was one
more turkey that came to save me. Their tiny shadow was walking very, very, very
slowly to the door behind everyone else. It was my grandmother! She came
too?



     “We
  came to save my son on the counter top!” my dad said with a proud face.
Everyone else had a proud face, but my grandmother was too old to make a face
and she couldn’t even come fast enough to save me!



   “You can’t get the
turkey!” the human said.



     My
mom, dad, older brother, and sister ran closer to the table. My grandma walked
very, very, very slowly to the table behind
  them.



  “Why?” my mother said
with an attitude. The humans got closer to my
mother.



   “I was about to
cook your yummy son!” the human said.



   “Well I’m about to
cook you and your family!” my mother said.



    Did you know
what my mother did? She threw mashed potatoes on the human’s face! The human’s
big mouth was wide open. She took the mashed potatoes off her eyes and
  mouth. 



     “I
  think this belongs to you!” the human said as she threw salad on my mother’s
face.



     My
  whole family was in a food fight except my grandmother. She told me to come
  home with her, so we left.



     When
we got home, my grandma cooked me some gobble soup because she knew I was
hungry. The worms were really delicious, especially with the turkey feathers!



    After I
ate, the rest of the family came home. They looked terrifying! For Thanksgiving
dinner we just ate the food left over on their
bodies.



     This
experience made me realize how much I love Thanksgiving! I am thankful to have
my family! If I didn’t have them, I would have been eaten by now. And I really
enjoyed eating the salad from my mom’s face. Maybe next year we can have another
food fight!



P.S. Make sure you save me some salad for
  Thanksgiving!


 
 
Do 
    you want to become the best superhero on earth? Then follow these crazy
adventures to get your powers!


What
you will need:


a
lot of turkeys


have
super speed


a
mountain 


a
lot of candy


four
leaf clovers


has
the ability to fool someone


have
a lot of money


have
a lot of friends


loves
the elderly


and
a HUGE pumpkin


What
you need to do:


1.
Go to a farm that takes care of turkeys and get 100 gold feathers. You MUST get
them before sunset.


2.
Make sure you go to the North Pole and come back in 10 seconds.


3.
Carve a mountain that says “2013.”


4.
Buy your Valentine all the candy in the entire world.


5.
Find all of the 4 leaf clovers in Ireland.


6.
Fool at least a million people in 1 minute,


7.
Dive in the ocean and find a rare blue-greenish gem and give it to your mom
before she wakes up.


8.
Buy your dad the most expensive car in the world.


9.
Sell 100 U.S. flags in 30 seconds.


10.
Have at least 50 people in each county in the world.


11.
Spend time with your grandparents for 1 week.


12.
Carve the largest Jack-O-Lantern in the world


Can
you figure out the pattern in how to become a superhero?


(Clue
it has to do with the months!)


 
 
 
Who
should I meet? An actress, a doctor, a teacher, or a nurse? Oh, I know 10 people
I should meet!


I
would like to meet…


1.
Laura Marano – Actress / Singer
When did you start your acting and singing career?



2.
Robert Downey Jr. – Actor
What was your favorite movie to act in?



3.
My grandfather – Family member
How old are you?


4.
Bella Thorne – Actress / Model
When did you start modelling?



5.
Peyton List – Actress / Model
Why did you start modelling?


6.
Beethoven – Composer
How
did you start your composing career?



7.
Kelli Berglund – Dancer / Actress
How did you start to become flexible?



8.
The Fierce Five – Gymnasts
Can
all of you guys do the vault competition?



9.
President Obama – Politician
What
inspired you to become the president?



and
10. Steve Jobs – Inventor
What
gave you the idea of making the iPad?

 
 
  
    I think my whole class knows that music is my passion. Let me
introduce myself. I am a pianist. I have other friends in my class that I know
are musicians such as Erica and Isabelle. (Click their names to visit their
blogs.)


 
   I started to play the piano when I was 5. My  mom inspired my
to play piano.  For my fourth birthday, I always wanted to have a keyboard.
So, I did play it. I started to play easy songs like Twinkle Twinkle Little Star
and   Mary Had A Little Lamb. Until one day my mom was playing on my
keyboard. I loved the song. I asked my mom if I can play piano. My mom said
"yes!" This is where it all began........


After
3 years with my first piano teacher he taught me how to play this:



Fur Elise

Invention No. 13 in A Minor


 


  and many more!


 
   In 2012, I transferred to a new piano teacher because my first
piano teacher's prices were too high for my parents to pay! I transferred to
Erica's piano teacher and he is currently my teacher! Right now, I feel like
music (or playing piano) is my life! I think it is really important to me! I
know it is really hard for me to find time to practice playing my piano pieces
but it is worth it!

 
 
On Friday, something amazing happened in our school, we had an
assembly on bike safety. Since I know some tips about bike safety why not I tell
you the secrets?


When you ride your bike do
you:


Wear a helmet?


Put very bright clothes
on?


Check if your brakes
work?


Check if you have a flat
tire?


Check if your chain is
okay?


Do you wear shoulder
pads?


Do you wear knee pads?


Do you ride your bike side by
side?


Do you give the driver hand
signals?


If you don’t, you need to. Here are some reasons
why?


#1. The reason why you need to wear a helmet is for your safety.
Now you may be saying to yourself oh I do but, do you know another reason why.
It’s because children under 17 has to wear a helmet. (It’s against the law.) If
you don’t wear a helmet you may get an accident and go to the hospital and also
the police may catch you and your parents/ guidance may have to pay a $100
because you’re not wear a helmet.


#2. The reason why you need to put on very, I mean very bright
clothes is because you may be riding your bike in the dark or it’s fall and
you’re riding your bike in the road or in the side walk about to cross the
  street. The driver may not see you and guess what, you’re going to have an
  accident. In order not to have an accident is by wear very bright colors like:
  neon colors. If the driver will see you in your very bright clothes, the driver
  will stop.



#3. The reason why you need to check your brakes, chain, and if
you have a flat tire is because you may fall of your bike if any of this (if
  you’re chain falls apart or falls of the ground, if you have a flat tire, or if
  your brakes doesn’t works” happens to you, than you will fall. To prevent
  yourself from falling you should do the abc check. This is how you do the abc
check:


A: is there enough air in your
tire?


B: Are your brakes
working?


C: If your chain not falling or breaking
apart?


If you do this and everything is fine, you won’t fall of the
bike.


#4. The reason why you need to wear knee pads and shoulder pads
is because you may fall on the ground on your knees or shoulders. To keep safe,
wear knee pads and shoulder pads to prevent the accidents.



#5.  Do you ride
your bike with someone else side by side? Do you think it’s safe? If you do,
then you’re wrong! If you ride a bike side by side then you may both fall!
Imagine this. You and your friend are going to ride a bike. You both ride your
bike side by side. Then you and your friend needs to make a left to go to the
park. If you both make a left turn together, you will both fall on each other.
To prevent that you need to ride your bike behind another person so you won’t
fall on each other.


#6.  The reason why
  you need to give hand signals to the driver is because you may want to tell the
  driver to stop.


Here are the hand
signals:


Left Turn



Right turn/slow
Stop
That's all I have today!

Comment down below
If you knew some of these tips.
 
 
The first fact i leanred is that the Mayflower Compact signed by 41 men, aboard the Mayflower and showed their colony's freedom from the English rule. Another fact I learned is that the men (that signed the Mayflower Compact) saw that their new land had some laws. The laws of the new land was only up to 1691!!!!
My third fact I learned is that the settlers (from England) were trying to seek
some  religious freedom to the Mayflower Compact as in agreement each and other
of their faith that are upcoming rules of honesty and fairness. My fourth fact I 
learned is everyone who aboard the Mayflower  does not have the same goals.(Like to go to freedom, and the king should not laws and other stuff like!!)  My last  fact I learned about the Mayflower Compact is that the passengers the aboard the Mayflower were called (strangers)!!!!

Did you learn something new?
 
 
(1.  
Japanese planned a surprise attack against the United States started as early as January of 1941.


(2.  
The Japanese attacked the United States without warning.




(3.  
The attack lasted 110 minutes, from 7:55 a.m. until 9:45 a.m.



(4.  
The 2,335 U.S service men that fought in the war were killed and 1,143 were
  wounded. Sixty-eight people were also killed and 35 people were wounded



(5.  
The Japanese decided to attack on a Sunday because they believed Americans were relaxing  on a weekend.

Did you learn something new?
 
 
This week I call it "interview week"" because I interviewed 3 people and later you going to interview me! So if you want to hear the interviews then keep on reading!

On Monday, I interviewed Davie. So I decided to post what Davie said in the interview.

I told Davie to check out my weebly and skim through my blog post and blog side bar. 

While Davie was checking out my weebly, this is what he looks like:
Davie looks serious.
Davie looks like he doesn't understand anything. (Bad Sign!)
Davie looks like he can't see the words.
Davie looks like he's liking my blog.

Here are the questions I asked Davie and what he answered:

1. What were your first impression of this blog?

Davie answered " I think it's pretty good.  For example:  You a lot of vokis interesting pictures, and many other interesting web 2.0 tools."

2. What captured your attention?
Davie answered: " I saw many amazing widgets, a voki, some links, and some amazing pictures."

3. What distracted you on your blog?
Davie answered: " I got distracted by small is the font. For example: I couldn't really read your blog post on "My ten favorite things."

4. What suggestions can you give me to improve my blog?

Davie answered: " I think you should make the font bigger and you should respond more to the readers that commented on your weebly."

Now for my kidblog interview:
While Davie was checking out my kidblog , this is what he looks like:
Davie looks serious.
Davie loos like he can't understand what I wrote. He didn't really smile.

Here are the questions and what Davie answered:

1. What were your first impression of this blog?

Davie responded: " I thought your blog had excellent work!"

2. What captured your attention?

Davie responded: " I saw many amazing pictures with the correct citation, and many awesome web 2.0 tools."

3. What distracted you on this blog?
 Davie responded: " I thought the font was too small and I can barely read it and also the links were to bright."

4. What suggestions can you give me to improve my blog?

Davie responded: "  You can make less links, make your font a little bigger, and respond more to my readers."

That's all what Davie said on the interview.



Now it's Mrs. Osei-yaw's turn!

On Monday and Tuesday, I interviewed Mrs. Osei-yaw. So I decided to post what Mrs.
Osei-yaw said in the interview.

I told Mrs. Osei-yaw to
check out my weebly and skim through my blog post and
blog side bar.

While Mrs. Osei-yaw was checking
out my weebly, this is what he looks
like:
Mrs. Osei-yaw looks
serious. 
Mrs. Osei-yaw looks like she loves my blog.

Mrs. Osei-yaw looks like she can't understand what I wrote.


Here are the questions I asked Mrs. Osei-yaw and what she answered:


 1. What were your first impression of
this
blog?

Mrs. Osei-yaw responded: " I thought it
was very engaging and the graphics were very
attractive."

2. What captured your
attention?

Mrs. Osei-yaw responded: " I thought the voki attracted your attention because it kept on following where every the mouse went."

3. What distracted you on the blog?
Mrs. Osei-yaw responded: " I thought I had a really hard time understanding my voki."

4. What suggestions can you give me so I can improve my blog?

Mrs. Osei-yaw said: " I think you should make your text pop out little more by adding different colors, different font sizes, and make bold and underlined."

Now this is what Mrs. Osei-yaw said about my kidblog:

While Mrs. Osei-yaw was checking
out my kidblog, this is what he looks 
like:
Mrs. Osei-yaw looks serious. 

Mrs. Osei-yaw looks like she loves my blog.
 
I think she loves my blog posts.

Here are the questions I asked Mrs. Osei-yaw and what she answered:

1. What were your first impression of this blog?

Mrs. Osei-yaw responded: " I can tell as a blogger, you can enjoy writing stories and you take pride of your work."

2. What captured your attention?
Mrs. Osei-yaw responded: "I was amazed by the comments that you got and you blog posts."

3. What distracted you on the blog?

Mrs. Osei-yam responded: " I wasn't really sure where to go first."

4. What suggestions can you give me to improve my blog?

Mrs. Osei-yaw responded: " I would like it if you made the information   stand out more."

Last but not least, my mommy!


On  Tuesday, I interviewed my mommy. So I decided to post what my mommy said in the interview.

I told my mommy to check out my weebly and skim through my blog post and
blog side bar.

While my mommy was checking out my weebly, this is what he looks like:
My mommy looks serious. my mommy
looks like she loves my blog. 




Here are the questions I asked my mommy  and what she  answered:


 1. What were your first impression of
this blog?
My mommy responded: " It's fantastic because I never knew my daughter can do this. I really love your background, the  graphics, and the picture of the shoe."

2.  What captured your attention?
My mommy responded? " The readers that commented on your blog captured my attention because I really enjoyed reading the comments."

3. What distracted you on the blog?

My mommy responded: " Well the font is too small I have to go near the monitor to see it."

4. What suggestions can you give me on my blog?

My mommy responded: " I think you should put more interesting pictures."

Now for my kidblog

I told my mommy to check out kidblog and skim through my blog post and
blog side bar.

While my mommy was checking out my kidblog, this is what he looks like:
My mommy looks serious. 
My mommy looks like she loves my
blog. 




Here are the questions I asked my mommy
 and what she  answered:

1. What are  your first impressions of this blog?

My mommy responded: "I am so amazed. I really loved your background."

2. What captured your attention?
My mommy responded: " The tittle "Juliana's Fantastic Blog" and by how mant comments you received."

3. What distracted you on the blog?

My mommy responded: " I'm not really used to see a blog like thins so I don't know where to go."

4. What suggestions can you give me to improve  my blog? 
My mommy responded: " I think you hould write more interesting stories for my readers and change the color of my words."

That's all I interviewed!

 
I interviewed a lot of people during these days. Actually I interviewed 3! So I guess you’re going to me with the 8 questions
below.



Here are the 8 questions I’m going to 
answer:


1. How many posts did you write
(different post on weebly and kidblog)?
2. How many were school based,
your own interests or set by the challenge (one of Miss W challenges, see
list below)?
3. How many comments did you receive from classmates, teachers or overseas students?
4. Which post received the most comments? Why do you think that happened?
5. Which post did you enjoy
writing the most and why?
6. Did you change blog themes at all and why (on kidblog)?
7. How many widgets do you have on weebly? Do you think this is too many or not enough?
8. How many overseas students do
you have on your blogroll on weebly?



My answers:



1.      
Well, in my weebly, I have 28 blog
posts and in my kidblog I have 37 blog post.





2.      
Well I did 6 posts my teacher Mrs.
Vilas made up with. I did 22 on my own. I did all 9 challenges posted by Miss W.



3.      
I had received 82 comments from
classmates, teachers, and overseas
students.



4.      
The blog post I received the post the
most comments is All about me. I actually got the same number of comments
on other post but, I put All about me because it was the first one. I think
a lot of readers wanted to comment on that post is because they may want to
know more about me.



5.      
I think the blog challenge 1 “10
people dead or alive would you meet?” I thought it was really fun because I
enjoyed making up questions about my ten people.





6.      
Yes I did change my blog themes a
couple of times. The reason why I changed it is because I wanted readers to
like my background so then they can visit my blog a lot and comment too!



7.      
I have 6 widgets on my weebly. I
think it’s  too much because you have to scroll down for a long time.



8.    
I have 10 students in my blog roll. 




Comment down below what's the best things about my weebly?


 
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Hello readers, my name is Juliana. I love playing mincraft and playing the piano.

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Jospeh
Em
Maggie S
Amrita
Bella
Isaiah
Briana
Victoria
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Angelika
Aniysah
Antonio
Asha
Cayla
Danny
Davie
Dayanara
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Eileen
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