One day I was walking in the forest.  There was screams all over the place. Until I turned around and bumped into a beautiful girl named Golden. She smelled sweet as a flower and all her feathers were gold! I wanted to marry her but then she ran away! The next day I bumped into Golden again but this time she was with a huge turkey that was a boy! I was heartbroken. I didn’t know that Golden wasn’t available!  So I went home all sad.

     Just then someone knocked on the door. I opened the door and I saw Golden! She didn’t know that I was in love with her! So then we got married! I know right that was fast! 3 days later she ran away from me again! What a life I have. People often run away from me especially women! I have no idea what will happen next in my life.


 


Joshua
18/04/2013 19:06

Hi Juliana,
My name is Joshua.
Your story was really creative,
It was sort of funny when Golden just left him instantly.
I liked your story.
From your new blogging buddy Joshua

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